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The Luna Saga Part 1 the Cat by ~luismorton:iconluismorton:



The cat

I think all the greet stories or at least some of the them should begin with the classic scenario when boy meets girl, but sometimes fate and destiny could be a little bit tricky. Sometimes love and like are not always logical. While the wind flows inside a powerful storm a girl gets lost in her way to home, having a viola in her back and a blue dress that goes down to her knees, she will find an strange candidate to be the lover of her dreams.

“Storm beautiful storm, the canvas of my heart and the perfect melody to my soul. Please listen to me , I need something to say, my spirit is sick and I no longer believe in a perfect scenario when two lovers kiss, I really love him, but does my life still belong to him? While here I am dancing for you, in you perfect body of rain that falls in this park with a small lake in the shape of a smile”

Miracles and magic. Some people say that those things are almost impossible but in this universe that turn death stars into diamonds and let the rain fall in a park where a lonely girl dances, everything could happen, who knows maybe we may even talk with the animals or at least with one of them. And that was exactly what would happen to that girl.

There was cat hidden in a tree watching the girl dancing and talking with the rain, the cat, the shiny grey color cat managed to overcome his fear, and get closer to the girl, then he felt something weird in his heart. Love perhaps?

“I have never seen such beauty in my life, I never wanted to sell my freedom and have a long life, never dreamt in being with only one being until I die, but somehow you manage to get in my heart. I know my love is forbidden because we do not belong to the same kind or maybe because it was love at the first sigh, so I surrender my liberty to become your pet”

Sometimes when we see something strange we broke into fear, an emotion that have always save the human kind from the unknown dangers of the world, but when an strange thing has to do with the power of the feelings and poetry we tend to manage our instinct and let our heart to talk.

“Why? Why, why would you surrender your freedom so you can become my pet, you do know nothing about me, no life in this world can completely belong to someone. Besides you are still young and you have dreams to realize, I see no reason to keep you in my prison, and maybe I would never be able to like you back, because I have some that I love”  

Humans tend to reasoning, they think the things to munch and into many levels to give and find explanations but reasoning my friends does not work with love. Because love is wild and pure as the nature and the cosmos. Love is hardly tainted to fall in the dark grounds of the human thinking and so the feelings of the cats.

“I do not care if you already love someone, I do not mind. Please let me be your cat so you can be my master, does not matter if you ever spoil me and hurt me, I do not care if you never praise me, the only thing I wish is to be with you even as your pet. Let me show that I love everything of you. Your smile, your hair, your voice, your anger, your sadness .I will always be there always there so I can grow happy by your side”

Words posses an strange energy, an energy that can be the start for wars. Words can turn someone into depression or could be the principle or a never ending hate, but words can also heal the heart of someone and change the soul of person if they are well used. This time words did magic.

“I will get close to you, cat of the blue grey shine. I will forget my lover for a moment, and will be there to read your toughs and to hear your dreams, for you cannot be my pet to me, but instead you can be friend. Maybe some day life will get us closer as if life was written for the destiny”

The cat was happy and sad at the same time. That is the nature of the cats when they can get what the love, so he slowly walked away and hid himself behind the very same tree where he came from, still the girl already knew how to read and feel the poetry of his toughs and these were really strong.

“I will walk away for now because I do not want to cause us any pain, go and find your lover and if things do not work I will there, behind the tree where WE used to play when you were a bit younger and used to spoil me. Go on girl of the viola and calm the torments of your soul, so when you have a place in your heart do not doubt in share with mine”

With this I finish the story taking this park as my inspiration and the impossible love between a girl and a cat to write my tale. While I listen a song made for the viola in my music player in order to keep my heart in peace. Because the rain have already stopped and is time for me to go home.

“I found you, after a long time I found you. The man who posses the soul of the cat that he used to care, the child that I always saw in my dreams, the glimmer in my eyes and the crimson in my blood, and even if my heart now belongs to someone else I am here to tell what I have never ever dare to tell, so please wait until the waves of my soul get calmer and wait till the moment when I can tell you if would able to love you or not”

Said a girl in blue dress, having a viola in her back, while I was about to go home, in the magic that the words did. Life tell me is this another one of you games? I asked her name and she told me.

“You know my name and all the secrets behind it, you found the legend that made me like it. So I can scream my name into the air, you know my name and color behind it, you know my name and the legend within it, cos you were the one how tough me about it”

Yellow rose.
©2007-2009 ~luismorton
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Author's Comments

I was planning in making a single story about it but my imaganition is getting wild lately and i wanted to write about the many things i consider romantic in single saga.

This saga would be divided into 4 stories, and all of them wil bel related with each other.

The characters are based in real life characters but i will not mention thier real names, also the character and the romantic content here is based in my platonic love.

the chapters of the saga would be the following ones.

-the cat
-yellow rose
-the silver chain
-rain
-luna

All the chapters would be short, no bigger than 3 pages.

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