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Letter to Alicia

Alicia I am the only one who can hear your voice, the one that comes from the dungeons of your soul, and I am the only one ho can see the tears you always hide from everyone. I know we have not talked in while, it was my fault and I feel sorry for it. Thats why I am gonna try to brake the walls of death time with my uncanny talents, the ones I learn to ever touch you again.

You know I been playing for a while the same old black guitar sadly I am very sick to sing so I am looking for someone who sings form me, but do not worry I am going to put the lyrics outside the envelope so you can read anytime you feel alone. Sometimes is funny to see how this things of fate and life work, you were the one running from me and now I am the person who is hidden from you.

My dear flower of the wind I want you to forget about me, live your life fully and only if you have time leave flowers on my grave, the same flowers that look like you, with the petals that shine almost as your eyes did when I used to see them.

I do not know how many time is left for me in this world. I went to see two doctors and both said that end was close, oh God I try to do not cry but I really can not hold bacl any more, sorry if this letter has blurry parts, those were made with the tears of my eyes.

I love you thats why I am scare, I need you but I do not wish to hurt you. You know Alice life is only life when you love somebody that is why I am so sad, because from the moment I met you I got alive and now my body is about to die.

Alicia, I will watch for you day and night just like the angel that once I swore I was, please be not afraid because those words would not be lies, somehow I will always be by your side, I love you Alicia, I really do love you.
©2007-2009 ~luismorton
:iconluismorton:

Author's Comments

Alicia I am the only who can hear your voice
Trough earth fire and wind we will never be sent free
Alicia, Alicia, why?

All the critique and comments are welcome.

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:iconkyou-11:
wow...
for me its very sad
but I think it has a sense of hope
is like, when you know all is gonna be all right
while the people you love is safe.....

i really like it
:)
:iconluismorton:
thank you [link]

comments like your help the little flame inside my soul to keep writing

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"life is nothing but a short dream" By; Jorge Luis Morton Gtz
:iconhadarniel:
besides some grammar and spelling flaws, this is a beautiful and deep piece =)

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:music:Pale moon of January, hide the colors of the sunrise...
:music:The gentle dawn of a night that should not end
:iconluismorton:
thanks, and gonna keep in mind the grammar stuff, and just like all the things that I upload to deviantart this letter is side story of a little tale i made.

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"life is nothing but a short dream" By; Jorge Luis Morton Gtz
:iconhadarniel:
if you need any help with grammar, i'm quite good at it, you can ask me anything you want =)

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:music:Pale moon of January, hide the colors of the sunrise...
:music:The gentle dawn of a night that should not end
:iconluismorton:
thanks dude, hahahah actually i think that will need some help soon since i am about to finish the side story of Mr. Who?

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"life is nothing but a short dream" By; Jorge Luis Morton Gtz
:iconhadarniel:
just call me when you need me ;)

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:music:Pale moon of January, hide the colors of the sunrise...
:music:The gentle dawn of a night that should not end
:iconth3chos3non3:
Wow...

this left me speechless.

There isn't too many errors, and overall, it's beautiful

truly

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"How can you be old & wise, if you were never young & crazy."

:heart:Jake.
:iconluismorton:
Thank you, i wrote that one a while ago for. and i gonna keep checking my grammar ^^

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"life is nothing but a short dream" By; Jorge Luis Morton Gtz

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